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196  BPSITE / Geek's Corner / Cold Fusion on: October 22, 2005, 10:44:32 PM
The reviving has begun! Don't say I didn't warn you!
197  BPSITE / Temple of Caliginosity / Who knew? on: October 22, 2005, 10:40:06 PM
all right, it's on
198  BPSITE / Arts & Literature / The Movies on: October 22, 2005, 09:10:11 PM
That was the joke behind it.... They purposely put BFG to mean Bio whatever, because it really was a Big Fuckin Gun.

Just go see the movie..
199  BPSITE / Temple of Caliginosity / Who knew? on: October 22, 2005, 09:07:10 PM
If you shoot me one more time... I will revive every topic I can find! In any forum!
200  BPSITE / BPSITE Headquarters / Avatar and Signature Discussion on: October 22, 2005, 06:39:37 PM
Well, I never knew that. It shall be changed because I am no Nazi.
201  BPSITE / Arts & Literature / A taste of what you're listening to... on: October 22, 2005, 06:38:03 PM
Just copy and pasting there Galmort  LOL

Godzilla - Blue Öyster Cult

With a purposeful grimace and a terrible sound
He pulls the spitting high tension wires down

Helpless people on a subway train
Scream for God as he looks in on them

He picks up a bus and he throws it back down
As he wades through the buildings toward the center of town

Oh no, they say he's got to go
Go go Godzilla, yeah
Oh no, there goes Tokyo
Go go Godzilla, yeah

Oh no, they say he's got to go
Go go Godzilla, yeah
Oh no, there goes Tokyo
Go go Godzilla, yeah

Rinji news o moshiagemasu!
Rinji news o moshiagemasu!
Godzilla ga Ginza hoomen e mukatte imasu!
Daishkyu hinan shite kudasai!
Daishkyu hinan shite kudasai!

Oh no, they say he's got to go
Go go Godzilla, yeah
Oh no, there goes Tokyo
Go go Godzilla, yeah

History shows again and again
How nature points out the folly of men
Godzilla!
202  BPSITE / Arts & Literature / The Movies on: October 22, 2005, 06:31:25 PM
The gun is called like.. Bio F(something) G(something), scientific name, which they abbreviated to BFG. And yeah... he's like about ready to have sex with the gun based on the music in the background.
203  BPSITE / Temple of Caliginosity / Who knew? on: October 22, 2005, 06:30:02 PM
I could probably find more.

The age of reviving old topics is upon us!
204  BPSITE / BPSITE Headquarters / What kind of Marshmallow roaster are you? on: October 22, 2005, 06:28:33 PM
You know me best Adam  :rolleyes:  
205  BPSITE / Temple of Caliginosity / Tear.. on: October 22, 2005, 06:27:16 AM
That's a bad smiley Lanair... It offends me!

Just kidding.
206  BPSITE / Temple of Caliginosity / Who knew? on: October 22, 2005, 06:26:30 AM
The story, I don't take part in your lame bondage activities.
207  BPSITE / BPSITE Headquarters / Avatar and Signature Discussion on: October 22, 2005, 06:25:14 AM
This eagle thing? I just did a Google Image Search for "drp" and it came up with this. It has something to do with Germany though.
208  BPSITE / BPSITE Headquarters / Speak like thee war a pirate day!!! on: October 22, 2005, 06:23:56 AM
So how bout them Vikings? :miffed:  
209  BPSITE / BPSITE Headquarters / Funny Cartoons on: October 22, 2005, 06:22:50 AM
Just post a Calvin and Hobbes, nothing can beat that.
210  BPSITE / Arts & Literature / Short Story on: October 22, 2005, 05:32:31 AM
I never really liked English... so I am not too good at this. Galmort is the super grammar guy.

But hmm.. I really like how you played those things into the story. The only thing I could offer would be that during the sentence

"He had seen things like this before, he had even been a part of the other side of the deal in the past, but it had never happened to him before."

Maybe use a different word than before at the end? To me it sounded repetitive. Not a big change, but overall I thought it was very, very good. Good luck in the contest.
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