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Title: What Am I? Post by: Drauka on June 08, 2004, 03:29:49 AM I have seven or eight poems that are in the same style, and it annoys me. So finnally I decidd everyone has a style that just comes out when they write
What Am I I am the holy faithless. I am the masked faceless. I am the skilled graceless. I am a labourless peasant. I am a curvless crescent. I am the unenjoyed pleasant. I am the weak power. I am the sweet sour. I am the first, last hour. I am the truthful lie. I am the unwatching eye. I am the uncolored dye. I am the holy hell. I am the unrung bell. I am the sick feeling well. I am a local tourist. I am a defiling purist. I am the quitting endurist. I am a flock of flightless hawks. I am basically unorthodox. I am a simple paradox. What are you? Title: What Am I? Post by: mole on June 08, 2004, 04:15:24 PM nice poem but its sympathetic to my mood and thats bad
Title: What Am I? Post by: Perdition on June 08, 2004, 05:36:59 PM love it. you are just wow *goes back to planning to steal drauka's brain*
Title: What Am I? Post by: RipperRoo on June 08, 2004, 07:56:42 PM Some of the rhyming is very tenuous, but other than that its great.
Title: What Am I? Post by: Uber Peasant on June 09, 2004, 11:44:57 AM talking bout the peasants- :cool:
nice poem, and nice that you got it to rhyme. hate those oens that dont... Title: What Am I? Post by: mole on June 09, 2004, 01:49:42 PM hey i like poems that dont rhyme a lot more
Title: What Am I? Post by: RipperRoo on June 09, 2004, 03:48:29 PM Im with peasant on this one, poems that dont rhyme or scan arent even poems, just a collection of words...
Title: What Am I? Post by: SS on June 09, 2004, 04:22:15 PM Poems don't need to rhyme (although I prefer ones that do), but scanning is important. If the words don't flow gracefully, then it's just a collection of words.
Title: What Am I? Post by: Rug on June 09, 2004, 07:28:12 PM Quote I have seven or eight poems that are in the same style, and it annoys me. So finnally I decidd everyone has a style that just comes out when they write Sounds a LOT like Rotting Christ lyrics. Making it good. :). What Am I I am the holy faithless. I am the masked faceless. I am the skilled graceless. I am a labourless peasant. I am a curvless crescent. I am the unenjoyed pleasant. I am the weak power. I am the sweet sour. I am the first, last hour. I am the truthful lie. I am the unwatching eye. I am the uncolored dye. I am the holy hell. I am the unrung bell. I am the sick feeling well. I am a local tourist. I am a defiling purist. I am the quitting endurist. I am a flock of flightless hawks. I am basically unorthodox. I am a simple paradox. What are you? Title: What Am I? Post by: mole on June 09, 2004, 08:10:10 PM drivel i love poems that dont rhyme or atleast dont rhyme anything liek this one must be some pshychological enjoyment of eratic and different things
Title: What Am I? Post by: Drauka on June 11, 2004, 07:20:30 AM Damnit you know there are at least four people in this thread who know who the daughter of the nine moons is.
That pisses me off. If I wanted wheel of time signatures I would goto the offical forum. And who the heck is rotting christ? Title: What Am I? Post by: Uber Peasant on June 11, 2004, 11:50:00 AM think its a band.
otherwise woudlnt a name like that get tagged for politiaclly correct stuffs (chrisitan peeps complaning and all) Title: What Am I? Post by: mole on June 11, 2004, 12:03:49 PM Quote four people in this thread who know who the daughter of the nine moons is. including yourself Quote think its a band. tis Title: What Am I? Post by: ns33 on June 11, 2004, 05:55:12 PM I know the daughter of the nine moons. (Did I say that right? :paranoid: )
Title: What Am I? Post by: Perdition on June 11, 2004, 06:01:48 PM Drauka why did you get rid of your sig? I liked it :(
Title: What Am I? Post by: Drauka on June 12, 2004, 08:07:50 AM I didn't its long, and I try not to post it often as it even annoys me if I post to much.
But here you go, pal. This is a spammy post, just for you. A brilliant mod you are, lol. Title: What Am I? Post by: Perdition on June 12, 2004, 03:08:04 PM :) *gives drauka a cookie*
Title: What Am I? Post by: Rug on June 12, 2004, 06:06:06 PM Quote "Ad Noctis" ... I am the healer and the deceiver I am the sober eye of fate I always take to be the giver I am the crimson eye of hate My love is sloth corrupting order I am the secret hand of pain I am the builder of this wanderland My face is known by the insane ... Title: What Am I? Post by: Guest on June 13, 2004, 04:41:41 AM Um. I see not the relatance...
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