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Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: Filran on December 19, 2003, 04:51:50 AM
Anyway, I'm filling this was random ramblings. And poems. And crap. Here is one that I skipped the first part of.


Feet.


Feet
Do not
Exist in
Normal means
Of normality, or
in ideas that all things
are of one thing in creation for,
god did not design shoes in his ultimate
plan, or, am I mistaken, and shoes
were planned all along? Could
it be possible, that we
have decieved others
about this matter
of shoes, that
we do not
even have
the slightest
ides of what we
are going on about
in our everyday lives?
God did not create the shoe.
Man created the shoe, and thus,
is man god?


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: underruler on December 19, 2003, 04:57:00 AM
*scratches head*...

did you write this?


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: Filran on December 19, 2003, 04:57:43 AM
Yes. Yes I did. If you are going to ask me what it is about, I don't know.


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: underruler on December 19, 2003, 05:00:42 AM
I tried to analyze it and...maybe it's about protection and how shoes protect your feet.  And then maybe you're thinking God doesn't provide protection, at least to your knowledge.


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: Filran on December 19, 2003, 05:01:55 AM
-blinks- I never would have thought about that.


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: Perdition on December 19, 2003, 05:04:09 AM
oo and then you can get into  "but what if there is no god?"  *puts on athiest hat*


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: underruler on December 19, 2003, 05:25:01 AM
That's prolly the most obvious purpose of the poem...I like to make things complicated.


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: SS on December 19, 2003, 12:52:48 PM
Quirky. :ph34r:


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: Filran on December 19, 2003, 01:15:34 PM
I've got a ton of crap like that swirling around in my head. xD


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: Thamior on December 19, 2003, 03:16:37 PM
I try to keep my crap swirling around in the toilet.  Especially when I'm sick as I am now.


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: opperdude on December 19, 2003, 03:21:20 PM
LOL

and fil haven't we all got that strange stuff wondering around in our heads?


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: underruler on December 20, 2003, 05:53:00 AM
You mean our brain....?
 


Title: My head is full of the voices.
Post by: Filran on December 20, 2003, 06:01:17 AM
Yes. Brain = grey shit. xD Anyway, I'll post more crud up here eventually.